For two hours after midday meal—while Bren and Tella boiled a compress of crushed comfrey root and willow bark for Kes’s bruised rib gap and Archivist Vel slept on a straw pallet by the warm hearth bricks—Daro Kesh stood over the pine frame stand table in the courtyard with a stick of white soapstone in his fist. Across the dark surface of the box-shaped slate, he drew and redrew the spirit vein and footwork shape of his school’s foundational shift. The Second Corner Outward Return, where a swordsman shifted from a high center-line guard into a lateral block.
Seyun sat on the bench across the table with his Account Book resting beside his braced hands. He watched the older swordsman wrestle with a problem that no simple willpower could cut through. The Court’s straight-channel primer had scored and narrowed the vessel wall beneath Kes’s right third rib. Because of that, the boy could no longer spread his rising breath evenly across all three lateral paths the way Daro’s standard training list needed. If Kes tried to practice Daro’s unmodified Four Outward Corners tomorrow morning, the middle path would hit that scarred third-rib bend and tear the tissue raw again.
At first, Daro approached the problem with the protective, authoritative instinct of a veteran master fixing a broken tool for a favored apprentice. With crisp, rapid strokes of the soapstone, he mapped out a custom detour diagram on the slate. Instructing Kes to close the third-rib branch on the first beat…


